Wow! This is really intense. Doesn't quite feel like the Voltron Force but it's entertaining.
Things I liked: the plan. Taking out all those people at once was a neat bit of strategy.
Things I didn't like: Sven taking pills. Not so much that he is, but that there's no indication of what they are to let the reader know why it's bad. Maybe that's just my job getting in the way of the story.
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