I still dont know where this story is going. Kyle is what holds it together for me. I barely know what each corps is supposed to represent.
Things I liked: Kyle's reference to the "Skittle brigade". It's exactly howi feel about the multi-coloured lanterns.
Things I didn't like: there's a little too much certainty that the reader knows all the players. I'd like a little more exposition.
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